Episode 1: Awakening – Page 46
Guh. This page ended up being pretty wordy. But, there’s a lot of dialogue here and it’s probably better this way than to have three pages of talking heads.
When I storyboard a new page, I place the text down and plan out where everything is going to be before I start my pencils. And even though everything seemed fine then, it got a little cramped when I was adding the lettering. So I switched “Maia” and “Alcy” in Pleione’s dialogue and switched their lines in the first frame.
Here’s how it is in the original script:

I’m pretty happy with how this page turned out overall, but I am always worried that I’m going to end up confusing my reader when I make these sort of changes. I hope this isn’t the case!
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